Name
Chamberlain University
NR-537: Assessment & Evaluation in Education
Prof. Name
Date
The successful student demonstrates a thorough understanding of community health development by integrating a variety of relevant concepts. The paper focuses on a community health development action plan, effectively incorporating community assessment tools, identifying major public health concerns, and emphasizing culture-based care and patient-centered care. The relationship between nurses and patients is also highlighted as an essential component of effective care. The paper should be between 6 to 8 pages, excluding the title, abstract, and reference pages, and must include at least five scholarly articles published within the last five years. The work should adhere to APA 6th edition formatting. A maximum of 60 points can be earned for the assignment.
Competency | Evaluation Scores | Educator’s Summative Assessment |
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Quality of Care | Satisfactory (20) | The paper demonstrated strong analysis, including the integration of relevant statistics on diabetes, influenza, and heart failure. The student effectively identified community health issues, such as barriers to achieving better health. The action plan was well detailed, measurable, and supported by evidence from scholarly articles. Critical analysis of the community’s 5-year health improvements was well executed, and the arguments were persuasive. Overall, a strong paper. |
Professional Behavior | Satisfactory (20) | The student included a detailed discussion on the ethical and professional aspects of community-based and patient-centered care. The examples provided, including the use of herbal medicine among Chinese immigrants, effectively illustrated the importance of cultural humility and culture-based care. Emphasis on the need for a strong nurse-patient relationship was well-supported and articulated. |
Evidence-based Practice | Improvement Needed (15) | While the action plan addressed public health concerns, it did not sufficiently address misconceptions or attitudes toward healthcare in certain communities. Although the issue of herbal medicine use was noted, the impact on health development was not thoroughly explained. The paper was professionally written and clearly analyzed health problems, but additional attention should be given to addressing all major healthcare concerns in the action plan. |
Overall, the paper was well-organized, informative, and demonstrated a high level of analysis. Subheadings were appropriately used, and the paper was supported with adequate evidence. However, further focus on misconceptions and attitudes within communities towards healthcare would improve the work.
The unsuccessful student did not fully meet the assignment’s requirements. The paper failed to adequately identify and analyze the community, its demographics, and major health concerns. Furthermore, it did not effectively integrate all key concepts such as community assessment tools, culture-based care, patient-centered care, and the nurse-patient relationship. The action plan was incomplete and lacked clarity. The analyses were not well-structured, and the paper did not include sufficient resources or follow APA formatting guidelines.
Competency | Evaluation Scores | Educator’s Summative Assessment |
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Quality of Care | Unsatisfactory (10) | The paper lacked proper analysis and application of key concepts. For instance, the concept of cultural humility was not included, and there was insufficient analysis of influenza vaccination for school children, which is a major health issue. The arguments presented lacked depth, and the claims were not supported by adequate evidence. |
Professional Behavior | Improvement Needed (15) | The paper included some discussion of nurse-patient relationships and culture-based care, but examples of how these could be achieved were lacking. The writing was clear in certain sections, particularly on patient-centered care, but the analyses lacked depth. Some sections were overly wordy, and sentence structure could have been improved for clarity and professionalism. |
Evidence-based Practice | Unsatisfactory (10) | The student made an effort to provide evidence-based examples, but the understanding of the community assessment tool was limited. The population and quality of life considerations were overlooked. The action plan lacked structure and did not clearly outline how specific actions would lead to desired outcomes. The tone in this section was informal, and the structure was unclear. |
The paper lacked depth in its analysis and failed to integrate all required concepts. The writing lacked organization, and the use of resources was minimal. Although some concepts such as nurse-patient relationships and culture-based care were explained well, the overall structure and depth of analysis need significant improvement. It is essential to study, analyze, and integrate all relevant concepts, providing clear examples to strengthen the work.
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